fifty words in a story – free

sobhanajm Uncategorized April 28, 2018October 2, 2018 1 Minute

2. FREE

I went for a walk today. I passed a mansion. Saw water trapped in a concrete fountain trying to sing and escape the concrete prison. I walked past a creek. The water danced and sang the song of freedom on top of its voice. I danced in my yard. Free.

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Published April 28, 2018October 2, 2018

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Steve Simpson says:

April 30, 2018 at 2:52 am

I particularly liked this one, Sobhana: the implications of the mansion and the malleable water trapped, contrasted with the flow and the dancing, an uplifting piece.

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1. sobhanajm says:
  
  April 30, 2018 at 4:54 am
  
  Thank you, Steve. I have always wondered about how water that is trapped feels…(and people).
  
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