Golden mote

sobhanajm Uncategorized May 11, 2018 1 Minute

white seas high above

blue seas down below

thunderstorms tear clouds apart

the warm breeze calms the angst in my heart

i close my eyes

take a deep breath

in the darkness

i remember your kindness

i open my eyes

and look below

the white seas calmly look at me

i take a moment to be me

the sunshine touches my cheeks

the metal bird soars high

i remember the joy of reading your first note

will never know why my heart danced like a golden mote

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An aspiring minimalist in beautiful Vancouver. @sobhanajm9 View all posts by sobhanajm

Published May 11, 2018

Steve Simpson says:

May 12, 2018 at 8:34 am

Vivid contrasting imagery and unexpected tranquillity. Well done, Sobhana.

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1. sobhanajm says:
  
  May 13, 2018 at 12:37 am
  
  I was on a plane from Ottawa to Vancouver, when I wrote this. The sights from the sky were so beautiful and made me feel tranquil. Thank you for your comment, Steve 🙂
  
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  1. Steve Simpson says:
    
    May 15, 2018 at 2:05 am
    
    My pleasure, Sobhana. It comes across in the poem.
    
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