let’s be brave and stumble

sobhanajm Uncategorized May 13, 2018 1 Minute

breathe

be still

believe

one day you will

untangle the knots

in your sleep

as you let go

and go deep

into the hidden corners

of your mind

hoping and wanting

to find

the words and unforgotten images

that will help you fill the blanks

across continents let’s be brave

and stumble into a slow dance?

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Published by sobhanajm

An aspiring minimalist in beautiful Vancouver. @sobhanajm9 View all posts by sobhanajm

Published May 13, 2018

Steve Simpson says:

May 22, 2018 at 4:51 am

This piece has a lovely gentle rhythm to it, “words and unforgotten images.” A pleasure to read, Sobhana.

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1. sobhanajm says:
  
  May 22, 2018 at 6:42 am
  
  I always wonder how another person experiences my poem…thank you for your feedback, Steve 🙂
  
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  1. Steve Simpson says:
    
    May 27, 2018 at 6:22 am
    
    My pleasure, Sobhana. Not everyone is the same (understatement 😃), but I know that I’m influenced by the sounds of words together.
    
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Forgive Forget Focus says:

May 27, 2018 at 1:44 am

Such a nice poem. 😊

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1. sobhanajm says:
  
  October 6, 2018 at 5:15 am
  
  Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
  
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sobhanajm says:

May 27, 2018 at 4:25 am

Thank you 🙂

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