better ever

sobhanajm Uncategorized July 21, 2019 1 Minute

my summer

your winter

gently start

the raging fire

a silent conversation

with no end

beginning

just divine sent

where did you come from

i cannot remember

i read a poem

one december

you thawed my heart

my winter

your summer

better ever than never

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An aspiring minimalist in beautiful Vancouver. @sobhanajm9 View all posts by sobhanajm

Published July 21, 2019

Margaret Baker says:

July 22, 2019 at 8:52 pm

Very romantic -Lovely!

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1. sobhanajm says:
  
  July 30, 2019 at 1:05 am
  
  Thank you, Margaret 🙂
  
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Steve Simpson says:

August 3, 2019 at 3:05 am

Lovely melody, Sobhana; with the repetition, the rhythm enhances the meaning, adds lustre to the piece.

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sobhanajm says:

August 3, 2019 at 4:55 am

I am glad it made sense and you liked it, Steve 🙂

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